Swell Rough Cut Analysis

This what we have done so far to the 2 minute film, 'Swell'. We have finished cutting the scenes and have put them together quite well i think. We haven't yet finished all of the effects etc yet and we are planning on making the flashback scenes, the ones at the party, made black and white. This is for the audience to see clearly that they are flashback scenes.
We still need to find some music and put it into the film. We need to find two different tracks, one sad track to play while we watch Kat in her bedroom and walking down the stairs. And another track to play during the party, to make it more like a party.
I think as the story line goes, we have achieved what we intended to. It is well set out, and i think it will be easy for the audience to understand the story line. Because of the amount of 'close-ups' we use for Ashley, i think the audience wil.l be able to understand emotionally her issues, and feel for her. I think a lot of people will find it realistic as it so easily could happen to a teenager.